My title is "Columbus was a moron".
Has anyone read Carpetbaggers?
I did it.
I'm just a random codexer, but I'd like to advise you not to use the word pilgrim in your game title. It is a very bland word, and it reeks of religious themes, which I suspect are not a huge turn-on for a lot of players. Words like void, mutiny, star, etc. work a lot better and make people curious because it is something they don't know, whereas everybody knows what a pilgrim/pilgrimage is - and boy don't we want to explore that in a videogame.
Absolutely agree.
Now serious.
Frst - all religious references are no go. Explanation why is above.
Titles like Iron/Steel Eden and such are good but sound as cheap teenage sci-fi of 70.
I think, the title should reflect main themes of the game, and translate emotional image of what the game world is.
So, what is real main themes?
Many people gathered together to reach a star, star system and a planet, and flight is so long, that only they descendants will reah it, and so long, that they completely forgot about they goal, Earth etc.
What it reminds you in terms of emotional picture?
Flight in a huge emptiness, in void, in abyss, when you don't even know from where you are coming from, and where you are going to.
For me, it reminds a falling, like if you are falling somewhere in the complete darkness, and don't even know when you crash into the ground.
I think everybody experienced a dream when you were flying and/or falling.
So something like "Long Fall Into Darkness" is ideal, but too long and thus pretentious.
Ideally you need something like this but in two words, maybe three.